Monday, October 11, 2010

don,t push the button

Zeke said to the evil scincet don,t push button but Zeke could stop him and he push the button and was counting down and Zeke ran with the scincet and the it was at 7,6,5,4,3,2,1,0 the place went bom and they were save The End

2 comments:

  1. This sounds like an exciting start to the story. Could you give us a bit more background on the story? Why did the red button make the place go boom? What project was Zeke and the scientist working on?

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  2. you had a couple unfinished sentences

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